英語六級滿分作文：毅力

On Perseverance

毅力

Behind every great achievement in anyone's life lies perseverance. We see this in everyhuman endeavour. Outstanding sportsmen spend all their time practising. Their endurance isbeyond imagination. The same is true of businessmen who build up for tunes. What we usuallysee are their achievements, but once we go behind the scenes we will find that they have put ina lot of continual steady efforts. We all have read of great musicians, writers and inventorswho have created or discover ed br eakthroughs in human achievement. Invariably they havesaid that they owe all their success to perseverance. As to college students, quite a bignumber of them have become successful language lear ners through perseverance, however, acertain group of them just stop half way and their previous efforts turn out to be fruitless.

Of all the countless examples the saga of Colonel Saunders is perhaps one of the mostoutstanding. The 65-year-old man from Kentucky had a dream to start a chain of fried chickenrestaur ants all over the world. To realize his dream, he knew that he needed a restaurant ownerto go into partnership with him to open the first restaurant and to fry chicken according to thesecret recipe he had. Colonel Saunders had knocked on 1008 doors before he finally found hispartner. It is doubtful whether many of us would have had the perseverance to knock even ahundred doors.

From the above discussion we can draw a conclusion that success comes to anyone who keepsworking perseveringly and lack of perseverance can only result in frustration and failure.

CET6六級作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

·In every human endeavour lies perseverance

* Sportsmen practising all the time

* Businessmen putting in a lot of efforts

* Musicians, writers, inventors created break throughs

* College students learning a language

· Colonel Saunders and KFC

· Conclusion

CET6六級作文內(nèi)容分析：

本文是一篇議論文。文中就“ 毅力”這一話題展開討論并發(fā)表自己的看法。第一段中第一句為主題句, 以下的論述均圍繞這一主題展開, 最后落實到學生學習一門語言必須有毅力才能成功。第二段中作者舉了一個翔實的例子, 進一步論證毅力的重要性。最后一段結(jié)論是全文的歸納。全文用詞得當, 語言流暢。

CET6六級作文萬能句型：

perseverance n . 毅力, 堅毅

human endeavour 人的努力

endurance n. 忍受力, 忍耐

beyond imagination 超出想像

The same is true of... ……也情況相同

go behind the scenes 去幕后

break throughs n. 突破, 驚人進展

invariably ad. 總是, 不變地

stop half way 半途而廢

turn out to be fruitless 結(jié)果一事無成

saga n. 家世

Colonel Saunders 上校桑德斯

a chain of 連鎖( 店)

go into par tners hip 合伙

sec ret recipe 秘方

fru st ra tion n. 挫敗