英語六級滿分作文：我的夢想

My Dream

我的夢想

Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionairesovernight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have alot of dreams, too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Luogenin future. However, I knew ve ry well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts. So Istudied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.

After graduating from college, I found a job as a teacher. Although I was very busy withteaching, I never gave up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I madeexperiments to pr actise and apply what I had learnt from the books. Sometimes, I was sodeeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time. Now I have made greatprogress. Several of my research papers have been published. The methods proposed in mypapers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. I am very happy. The ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway.

CET6六級作文結構分析：

·Everybody has a lot of dreams

* Some people’s dr eams

* Other people’s dreams

* My dream

· How I realize my dream

* Study hard

* Work hard

* Achievements so far made

* A long way to go

CET6六級作文內容分析：

本文為一篇記敘文。文中第一段為夾敘夾議, 以general comment 開頭, 引出“我的夢想”。第二段為作者為實現夢想所做的努力和取得的成果, 最后一句“成為科學家的階梯還遙遙在上, 但我至少已攀登了第一級。”既是總結又是方向。此句摹仿了Jack London 的散文“What Life Mean s to Me”中的一句精彩句子。

CET6六級作文萬能句型：

dream of 夢想……

jump to great fame 一舉成名

be indulged in . . . 沉緬于

propose v . 提出

ladde r n . 梯子

rung n . (梯子的)級